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Vennas Li's avatar

This was gripping from the first scene. I really liked how the technical detail never slowed the story down but instead made it feel more grounded and unsettling. The contrast between clinical precision and human cost was especially effective. I kept thinking about it after I finished, which is always a good sign.

Brendan Harding's avatar

Wonderful… I sense a novella rather than a short story. But, a wonderful mix of visual writing and technical detail.

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